Music Video-Fianl Piece

Above is the Final Draft of my Music Video. The things that I have done in order to improve my Video include, firstly, making the video slightly longer. From this I believe my Video is mor e likely to follow the conventions of other existing media products.
Secondly, I have inserted more video clips in order to make my video more interesting for my target audience and less repetitive.

The things I think I could improve includes the following; make the video less repetitive by importing more video clips. From this I believe that my audience will be more entertained by watching my music video. However, I believe I have related well to the genre I have chosen at the beginning of planning the creation of my products. This is because due to using filming techniques such as stop animation, I believe I have used the "make do" and "hand made" appearance that can be found in existing Indie media products which was discussed in my style models and audience profile.